WOW! You're poetry is amazing. It gets better and better. I envy your ability to do so many cool styles as well. Very good...certainly makes you an extraordinary poet. I rate this a five because you can take the ordinary things poets use all the time, like lines about fake smiles and broken hearts, and make them totally original. Great job to ya!
*ME*

You painted a very nice picture here. And I'll admit.. i loved your flow. And your moral especially. Your poetry always has an inspirational tint to it, and that makes it so very unique.

"I`ve been smiling, been laughing, gosh, I`ve moved on,
He`s nothing to me anymore, but a memory in my head."

I really liked that.. Because typically, people do try to convince themselves otherwise of what they feel. Thsi was very raw, and overall so amazing and realistic. I loved it.

Five.

Although you said this wasn't your best, I have to say, IMO, it's *one* of your best. At first I thought the person's love of their life had just left them [not for the army, just left], then I thought they had died, then when the army was mentioned I thought they had died at war. So basically I'm saying I was glad for the explanation - though I didn't find the poem that confusing.

It was well written. It really was.