Comments : Buses Arrive Too Soon

  • 16 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    It was hard to pick a favorite part in this one.
    So here I gooooo!
    "Think -- think -- breathe in and out, or out and in; blink -- blink, swallow -- keep it steady."

    I remember I told you once that I have a new favorite,
    every time you write and post a new poem.
    This one takes it's toll.. because this is my favorite.
    Maybe even for the week! :0
    Overall Rating: 6.5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by JoshCNakroshis

    Dude... That really is like... Umm... Dot Dot Dot... ish xD

    Umm I really don't know what to say...