This piece was fantastic!!.. loved every bit of it.. the flow and structure was great. I'm sure many can relate with this poem.. great job.. keep them coming

Wow.
I thought the poem you entered in my contest was good, you're an amazing writer, darling.

Flawles poem.

Except:

"It wont keep. . . " << won[[']]t

Other than that ONE tiny thing it's an amazing and flawless poem, once again.

And, I must say you have wonderful flow and emotion in this poem.