Very good. And I know how it feels as an athlete to enter a race or any competittion and have that adrenaline rush and push yourself to the peak. And I thought it was very creative that you wrote about this, very good job, keep it up.

Very refreshing read, I love poems like this...with a little story of self-inspiration to them that end very well. Flow was kinda shaky throughout but i was able to understand and follow along perfectly well done. Keep up your writing! 5/5

Very inspirational pome...never give up! Very positive maeesage....5/5...very creative and i like how you wrote it like a story....very unique

I liked this.

I found the idea behind this to be both original and unique in concept, and despite being relatively short, you managed to put in so much depth and emotion, which isn't always easy to do.

I thought your flow could be a little better in some places, but other than that I enjoyed the piece, and the inspiration it brings to the reaader.

Track, I'm guessing? Really, I have no idea, I don't really compete in anything ^_^

I liked this one, your language is simple, but really driving, It's cool ^_^

Thank you for leading me here!