Very POWERFUL!! It brought tears to my eyes.
I LOVE IT!

What a lovely poem, sad and emotive, 5/5

This was a truly beautiful and inspiring write. Extremely sad but perfectly amazing. I loved the message behind it. Keep writing! 5/5

` liz =]

What a touching poem hun. A beautiful tribute, completely different from what you've been posting, but your heart still shines through. I hope you don't get upset but I wrote a reply to it. You give me ideas I would never come up with otherwise. Love Erika

The Invisible

Thank you sir for hearing my cries
Believe me when I say I truly tried
To drown out the world with my heartfelt tears
It's hard to survive when no one hears

Had I someone to feed me I would not steal
I wouldn't have cuts waiting to heal
I wouldn't draw away when someone nears
Its hard to survive when no one cares

Thanks for seeing us when no one else could
Thanks for praying when no one else would
But together we stand and face our fears
Wipe away the remnants of our fallen tears

The poor with the poor, the lost with the lost
We'll survive together no matter the cost
The Lord will help and guide us all
Together we stand, divided we fall

Damn hun that's a sad one, but beautiful at the same time. I'm guessing those foster kids you played Santa for had something to do with this one? 5/5

Oh my goodness thats awesome. Really nice but really sad too :(

You touch me deeply Dennis! Thank you so much! Can I put this one in my blog?