Comments : I have lost you to the world

  • 16 years ago

    by MyEscape

    Tons of questions that run through many people's mind. Normally I wouldn't like this style, but since it is on something so easy to relate to, I enjoyed it. It has a fast pace to it and that's perfect for this poem because these thoughts RUSH through your mind, one after another. Good job!
    *ME*

  • 16 years ago

    by AhoudRanger

    Dude this is really KEWL !!!
    i loved it ! heres 5/5 :)
    and yo !! ty for the comment :)