Comments : Together As One

  • 16 years ago

    by twilightfan

    Best poem ever!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by alwayssofresh16

    This is very good ... you have talent.

  • 15 years ago

    by Invited

    So inspirational yet sad, very good work. You definitely have my vote!

    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Lol, this is so romantic and cheesy at the same time, but it is lovely to read!

    I like how you show how you become one, like he had the light to guide you, and that then connected you both together and made your light brighter, bright enough to light up the world.

    Beautiful little scene painted through dance!