That was a really good poem, i enjoyed it, 5/5 well done keep it up

WOW! not the ending I expected. It's very good. I liked the flow and rhyme a lot. It's nice to see a poet who can pull that off.
*ME*

Hey i know who that ones about haha *lol* love you lin

I liked this poem alot, but i expected it to end differently, your endeing makes it better in a way, anyways it rocked!!!

Wow that was an amazing story you told and I was curious as to how it would end. I was somewhat disappointed by the ending because it seemed unfinished to me but nonetheless it is a *5/5*

5/5 great poem x