Hey this is a great poem its really powerfull and showz what a lot of teenage girls are going through i love it

God, you never cease to amaze me! I love this poem and can relate. You are soo talented! well done 5/5 XD

WOW WOW WOW! That was amazing! Your poetry is very inspiring. I usually like to offer suggestions, because we ALL get the "oohh i love this piece" comments or the one liners, but seriously, your piece doesn't need any big help at all. The only suggestion I have is to take out the word "that" in line number 27 because it helps the flow of the line better. Other than that, GREAT JOB!
*ME*

Awesome piece of work...it flowed beautifully....so many girls are like this too...alot of poeple can relate, including me...I love this! Great wrok! 5/5

You picked good and meaningful topic and managed to write good and very deep piece of poetry.
I like this poem, it is original and very disturbing in a way, because it holds so much truth (I mean, there are so many girls that act like that)
Well done!