Okay, i know poems dont have to rhyme but there's a few places it might need it, not to be a jerk, but it would sound better

O umm thanks i like really jus started doing poems.. ill get the hang of it soon... maybe you can help a little..

O umm thanks i like really jus started doing poems.. ill get the hang of it soon... maybe you can help a little..

O umm thanks i like really jus started doing poems.. ill get the hang of it soon... maybe you can help a little..