Tis very good, love the vocab, i give it a 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!

Great poem!! I feel the emotion!!

Great words, full of meaning

Wow amazing you are so great at poetry i cant beleive someone wrote this its just.. perfect

What i love about this poem also gets me lost- the symbolism and metaphores
i love the poem, but i also have to think about what most of it means
keep writing
5/5 for me

I LOVE this.
Your words were beautiful.
Just everything about this I love.
The symbols and metaphors.
Excellent job!!
5/5.