Wow... You wrote this amazingly, I honestly enjoyed in every line. It is so powerful and your choice of words is excellent. I love rhythm of it, it is truly deep and emotional. Atmosphere that you created here is unique and impressing. Well done!

Wow... this is so beautiful, filled with emotions and greatly written acrostic. Every stanza is so touching. I like your descriptions in the whole piece, they have such vividness.
Keep up!