Beautiful poem1 It flowed beautifully...Very well written and I love the use of wording! You do an awesome job on your poems! Keep up the spectacluar work!

From the sun I felt cold
Through hunger I knew thirst
And the dichotomy of pain
Is what I felt the worst

I love these lines in your poem. It is written very well. I loved it. Great job keep up the great work 5/5

What a dark but excellent poem, well written.
5/5

I really loved this one. You have great talent. Good job with this one. 5/5

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