Comments : Stare as the red from my veins cry

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Wow, i like it! It was full of emotion and very well written! I feel like that alot too....anyways, great job! Keep it up!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by manic moments

    Tripp, your my favourite

    hands down

    take the audiences mind to the brink of your sanity

    then watch them tumble down beside you

    to dream this isnt true..

    would jus be lying to oneself

    are you ok?

    love niquee

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I always enjoy reading your poems because your style no matter what topic of poem is always poetic. The flow is great and so is the word choice - Excellent job with this piece 5/5 GG23

  • 16 years ago

    by kelsey

    So, basically we use to talk on this site like 2 years ago.
    im not sure if you remember me, but i remember you.

    anyways...
    just wanted to let you know that i feel the same way about everything.
    this poem describes me.
    depression, anorexia, cutting, suicidal feelings... everything i have/am going through.

    you're not alone.
    good job, keep it up.
    writing things keeps me going through each day as i'm sure it does you.
    good job.