Comments : Wishes She Could Cry

  • 12 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow a trully descriptive and depressing poem very nice 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

  • 12 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Wow! I love it! It flowed beauifully...great work!

  • 12 years ago

    by Teria

    Wow, that's amazing darlng.
    Honestly, I didn't expect this poem. I expect some sort of love poem.
    And, I'm not too fond of poems that include ANY type of cutting stuff, not because it's cliche but because it just triggers emotions from my past. Lol. :| Oh well, less about me and more about your amazing poem.

    I love it, darling. You have no idea.
    The emotion is flawless.
    The flow is flawless.
    The word choice is beautifully flawless.
    The ENTIRE poem is just esquisite.

    It's amazing.
    I love it. (:
    Fo Sho.

  • 12 years ago

    by Blissful

    Wow that was just haunting. I truly got chills from reading that. The emotions were dark and chilling, I felt uneasy and unsure. That is what makes a poem effective, if it can imfuse emotion into the reader and this poem surely did. Well done *5/5*

  • 12 years ago

    by RobinAnn13

    This poem was awesome!! I loved your descriptions and your rhyming was perfect for the poem. ^-^