Wow. This one, hun is flawless.

Though there are no stanzas, the flow is still utterly amazing, because the poem itself is powerful, but each line is not too powerful. (:
And, the words. . . they just flowed so well. It was amazing.

The word choice, once again was amazing. You did a wonderful job with the imagery and everything.

The emotion, was perfection. Wow, honest to God it's amazing. The other poem I just read each line had so much power in it, which is good, it's not bad, but this the power was in the entire poem, it wasn't like; power power power power, it's like. . . p . . . o . . . w . . . e . . . r.

Do you understand? Now, the power in the last one was still amazing, don't get me wrong. It went well with the poem, but the power in this poem goes perfectly with this poem.

5|5

Beautiful piece you have here. The loving emotions were captivating and flawless. I loved the pace and everything flowed perfectly. The last sentence was the perfect way to end the poem. Well done *5/5*

Very, very good! Loved reading it! <3