Sorry for the one- liner, but all I can say is: WOW!

'So I took my own virginity,
placing burnt and blackened hands between my thighs
including a sculpting method that uses shards of glass.'

thats a good start to the stanza. i love your writing, its very i don't no different but in a good way. its pretty cool. kinda hard to understand but leaves you with that look on your face of surprised