Girl, i want you to know that you're not alone. tons of us are broken inside. the thing is, certain elements of life can piece us up together or tears us down. it is up to you to choose your life's elements.

Lol ur welcome =]

seriously... there's a lotta ppl out there with a sad story hanging on their backs that simply keep it from the world.

Woow, great poem, i loved the flow it had to it, i can soo relate to ur poem, so chek mine out im sure u could relate as well coz i feel the same way, keep up the work.

Luv Fay :).

I really like this poem b/c i have done that before and i never noticed how depressed i really was until i looked into the mirror...nice job....5/5

Wow! so much emotions i liked it...i know how u feel cuz i'm jus like that girl...keep up the good work gave u a 5/5:)

Nice poem.... i can relate to that as well.....
hmm... most of your poems are very hearfelt...

Your a great writer

Nadia

5/5

Aw
this is so good
very good
i like it
but its sad because this seems true

Great Job!
i love it!

<3
XxAshleyxX