Short and good :) i like it

I liked it

Nice..

Nice..

I like it, it is short but very powerful, it has good atmosphere and last line is truly effective. I enjoyed reading it, it could be longer but you described your topic, which is great, on excellent way. Well done, it deserves 5.5

Great great job...

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Luv it :)

Oooh! That's cool. Short and sweet. And succinct. Impacting.

I really enjoyed that poem. it was very very nice... you've got some god given talent which is more than anyone can say for me... but you should keep it up and write more...

*when you love someone never let them go*