Comments : Betrayed

  • 16 years ago

    by divine divinity

    Wow, this leaved me wanting more, more answers to the questions it envoked in my head. great poem!

  • 15 years ago

    by J u l e s

    Well I would like to say, Forgive and forget. Never hate a person or let your self hate a person because once you do, you are easily broken to hate many other people. Forgiveness is what is going to get you through life, holding a grudge will get you no where

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Wow. This is just overflowing with powerful raw emotions. I love the one line by itself...it adds great emphasis to the poem. Very nice work here. keep it up. Nik