"You just walked away,
Scars are in your eyes,
Falling, aren't we all?
Resting in your lies,"

^^I love that stanza, so much power and emotion in so few words.

This piece really tugs on the reader's heartstrings and I found it to be bittersweet, and beautifully written.

Flow was good throughout the piece and the depth you portrayed in here was wonderfully done.

A story within a poem is what i always love to see, have to say there is something about the stanza
"You just walked away,
Scars are in your eyes,
Falling, aren't we all?
Resting in your lies,"
made me connect with this piece even more, great write keep it up