That's an absolutely beautiful poem of love. Very short but it reflects all your feelings. Great job.

Thanks!
It's actually quite old ... most of my poems are. (I have just recently come over a Writer's Block). But what tears my heart in two, is that our relationship ended shortly there after.
:P

I really enjoyed this poem, short and too the point, great job at showing your emotions, sorry to hear that you have recently split up =[
Hope it's all ok

Hi...
well written poem but I think it's too short... you could have added at least one more stanza to it...