Wow i love this, specially when its put in the conversational. wow. this explains alot in a short write. i love it.
very good write keep it up.
5/5 :)

Aww, thats so sad. i loved this, is was short, but great. great job. 5*5
Kimberly

I really really enjoyed the use of sonics with the sounds of the heart beat. It really gave it the extra little bit. I, also, really enjoyed this line:

Promises are just pretty lies tied up with ribbons though.

It's subtle and true that 99% of promises fit this description.

Great write

Thanks for the great comment on my latest poem.

Alex

By the way, I wanted to let you know that you are the only poet with a poem in my favorite poems <3.

This is really short and powerful, well done xx