Wow. that was a really good piece. You didn't have any flow or rhyme off, and no grammar errors that I could see.
Too many times I found a way
to hide among the stars
My mind, but just a stranger,
to the hole inside my heart

that part really stuck with me.
Enjoyed!
*ME*

Wow. that was a really good piece. You didn't have any flow or rhyme off, and no grammar errors that I could see.
Too many times I found a way
to hide among the stars
My mind, but just a stranger,
to the hole inside my heart

that part really stuck with me.
Enjoyed!
*ME*