I really liked this poem.
The ending was amazing.
Every line was perfect.
5/5
-Heather

Wow... I'm speechless. You had me from the first line, and continued to amaze me through the whole piece. This is completely brilliant, every line is filled with great descriptions and emotions. Flawless piece, outstanding and so captivating. I love your choice of words here and the imagery that you created that simply crawled in the mind through the whole piece. Truly brilliant!
My favorite part is:

-Her hands collided with the moon,
as it resembled her face; a mirror made of stone
hanging delicately in a wreath of barbed and stitched hearts.
The stars became sweet tears,
pouring from the beautiful eyes neglected eternally;
given for the remains of tainted lust reflecting
my ... last breaths unto the Earth.-
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Absolutely breathtaking.