ItS aN interestinG feelingS... donE verY nicelY... mY deepesT regardS 4 yR expressionS... 5/5 keeP iT uP anD writE morE.... thiS iS luzaN

Thnx luzan..ill keep trying to gett aall these deelp feelings out..

Good poem.. i really liked it.. i can definitely relate.. check out mine sometime.. <3 Bubbles

I liked how the emotion built up during the poem and then at the end revealed itself, great job, short and sweet
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