It was nice. Left a lot of room for individual interpretation. Good job.

Good job, nice flow love the attention to detail.

It is so rare that I like a love poem, but this one is done very well. The first stanza is, in my opinion, the best, but the others come close. It's different enough from the original poem, yet I can still see enough similarities to increase the meaning. Very nicely written! 5/5.

Well done. Great word. I love rap and the way you worded it made it very appealing to me. Gread work keep at it, it will take you far.:-)

Wow! it flowed brilliantly, i lurrrved dis poem! keep up da gd work! :)

Oh I just loved this one!!!!
The last line truly blew me away and the poem all together was an amazing piece of words put together. It all flowed beautifully and the way you write seems effortless. Well done this has to be my fave by you.

*5/5*

Wow...lots of ryme....I liked it though! Very powerful wording. VEry unique and creative...Loved it! Keep writing! Youre doing awesome! :) 5/5

This poem is so beautiful <3 my favorite part was the last stanza... it just showed how love can mend broken wings:
The golden webs we weave, will one day fade away,
The shimmer that golden glimmer, growing ever dimmer,
Will one day with time, lose it's shine, so called divine,
And the bird it sings, no longer caged, flapping golden wings.

This is amazing..with each new poem you post, you always manage to amaze me :)

I don't even know what I could say that would even begin to sum up how I feel about this piece..it's just beautiful.

The imagery, the content, concept, the flow..they all come together to create a truly beautiful read.

Since you explained that the 'caged bird' symbolizes a broken heart, and since I've read this poem 4+ times now, I have come to the conclusion that it is multi-layered, therefore deep, and also beautiful. Nice writing, my friend.

Ciao! 5/5