Comments : The Man You're Looking For

  • 16 years ago

    by Krazikoko

    Ur amazing, this was beautiful and so rhytmical with the rhymes. Absolutely amazing!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by HUGIYDAWY

    Aww omg this is sooo sweet n cute i love it .xx

  • 16 years ago

    by PJ

    Omg that poem brough a tear to my eye. that is a really sweet poem mate, keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Helene

    It's very beautifull, it seems you understand women or at least have read lots of womens magazines.. *s* sorry, but still, it's really beautiful. Like the rhytm, like the concept, it's really sweet and so on.. ^^

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica Evelyn Maxwell

    Amazingly written my friend.
    pure and true.
    great job =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Breeeezie

    AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW ITS AMAZING and WONDERFUL reminds me of the superman i found

  • Wow, this poem was really good. Kind of reminds me of a poem I read before, but this one is very beautiful. I really loved it. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    OH MY .. that was just amazing!! By far, the best poem I have read from you and one of the top poems I have read on this site. It was so easy for me to relate with the type of man you were describing because it is what I, and I bet most girls, want. Well done, this poem is going in my faves. :]

  • 16 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    Are you looking for a man who'd understand you?
    When you're down he's always there right beside you

    can I make a suggestion? I think you should take one of the you's out and switch it with another word. otherwise I really enjoyed reading this one, guys that can write are hard to come by, but guys that can write well are another thing. keep it up.