Good one. i know some girls like that one. =*

This poem is so real it really shows what kind of world we're living in how people go bout in the world without knowing
i don't no what your talking bout in your profile which i just read it says u no your poems ain't all that good of course they are they`re amazing i think you`ll go far in poetry u should show it off in this oblivious world

This could be a song. It's pretty good, and it of flows.

"She's just a pretty girl, in a pretty world.

Suddenly her perfect world is thrust upside down."

That transition was abrupt but I like where it took the poem and how it all tied together at the end.

`tia