Comments : Prove them wrong

  • 14 years ago

    by Samantha

    I like it good job
    ~sam~

  • 14 years ago

    by Nykkiicia Cion

    I like this poem...the emotion is palpable...keep writing chico

  • 14 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    This is pretty good. The imagery had a huge impact to me.

  • 14 years ago

    by Joshua Grider

    This is written very well... :)
    i love it.
    oh and please return the favor.

  • 14 years ago

    by Lenny

    That was refreshing! Great style...
    Well structured. Rhyme wasn't too forced.

  • 14 years ago

    by Alma

    Beautiful poem
    you captured the relationship between ur father and u very well
    there was a lot of emotion and feelins involvd

  • 14 years ago

    by Jackie

    This is written with heart felt emotion, very good poem 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Meme

    AMAZIN!!
    keep it up :)

    ~gIrL~