I like it good job
~sam~

I like this poem...the emotion is palpable...keep writing chico

This is pretty good. The imagery had a huge impact to me.

This is written very well... :)
i love it.
oh and please return the favor.

That was refreshing! Great style...
Well structured. Rhyme wasn't too forced.

Beautiful poem
you captured the relationship between ur father and u very well
there was a lot of emotion and feelins involvd

This is written with heart felt emotion, very good poem 5/5

AMAZIN!!
keep it up :)

~gIrL~