Comments : Check Mate, You Win

  • 13 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I really loved this poem you did a fantastic job with it, the imagery and word choice were amazing. I love how it relates to life so well, sometimes the best way to win in chess or in life is to take a risk and leave yourself vulnerable. Amazing job 5/5 GG23

  • 13 years ago

    by Fsams

    Wow...what a lovely piece. Great rhymes and I love the last line :) The way words strung each other makes this one a great cohesive, poetically and lexically strong poem. :)


  • 13 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Wow...I really enjoyed reading your poem! Great piece....very desricptive and well did an amazing job! Keep it up 5/5!

  • 12 years ago

    by Randy Lee

    I think life is a game, and who you are is dictated by the way you play. It's always a pleasure to read something new from you.

  • 11 years ago

    by Randy Lee

    Two years is way to long to wait for something new from you.

    • 7 years ago

      by Tara

      I think I may actually perhaps be inspired now.....almost 4 years after your comment, old friend. Hope this finds you well.