Comments : Black suicide

  • 16 years ago

    by Cheshire Kat

    First:DON'T TAKE THE GUN!!!! PUT IT DOWN!!!! second: i feel exactly the same, like I continously have to put on a smile. i love how you just continued writing--it makes the character in the poem seem broken and hopeless.

  • 16 years ago

    by BrokenVodkaBottle

    Omg hun thats so sad, But i feel that way to. Trapped in a sadness that comes with all different feeling like lonleyness,Despair an PAIN!

    wishing i was dead now :(:(
    ...........

  • 16 years ago

    by Navy SweetHeart

    I know it's hard it's like everybreath feels like it's cutting you like nobody cares about you and everyone would be better off dead... well it's not true or well thats what everyone says to me...I know what it's like to want to die... or just to feel pain so you feel somthing other than numbness... Just hold on... it's gotta get better...

  • 15 years ago

    by mandy

    There is always someone in the world
    who cares about you. Besinds, someone
    who is mean and stupid enough to put
    you down isn't worth listining to, so why
    bother taking it to heart, i know it's super
    hero annoying taking in all that crap life
    throws at you, and no, people won't come
    around and suddenly be nice one day.
    but you will know forever that you were
    on "the good side", and maybe you've
    dont some wrong, we all have, but knowing
    you tried your best in life is the best feeling
    you can ever have towards yourself.

    Loved your poem, so much emotion put
    into it, I can relate to it, surprise, surprise
    (considering what I just wrote) but if
    a small loser like me can get through all
    this, then so can you :P, great job, 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by MERCY is never shown

    Aww i loved this it relates to what so many people are going through

  • 15 years ago

    by Alex

    Dude thats from the corazon...and i just noticed that i never commented this poem and it was the 1st one i read...out of all ur poetry..sad but true..but i LOVE it..

  • 15 years ago

    by Alex

    O0o by the way u know i CAN SO RELATE to this poem...

  • 15 years ago

    by XxHiis BooxX

    I love this poem..great choice of words and everything this poems has to be a 5/5 xD

  • 15 years ago

    by claire

    I felt that way once, not long ago actually but then i met this friend and she helped me understand somethings but its a really good poem i love the emotion

  • 12 years ago

    by supratim

    Dark and touching... <3