: o no really this is soo like another ex boyfriend hu i loved n i was jus another girl i really feel like this poem its really gud like the way its put together i love it..

Honestly i feel this way every tiem my bf looks at me...wat if he finds someone better? wat if the next girl is so much prettier...wat if im nothing compared to his ex girlfriends...but this poem is truly beautiful
with love,
christina

I can actually relate to this poem the whole 'another girl' thing. its happened to me so many times, but i never learn from my mistakes. but it seems like your taking more time to think about what your doing before you do it.
Anyway
Great poem, not sure about any type of scheme, although you probably just wrote it from the heart, i do that sometimes. but other then that its a really good poem.
good work

Very good and well wriitten
5/5
i loved it

The bit:
When you're close I say stupid things, I feel like a fool.
But you never seem to care, I kinda like that about you.
You think I'm perfect, but you need to understand the truth.
I'm so far from perfect, I have so many flaws.
I want you to know the real me and I want to know you.

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Thats exactly how it is with my bf atm, he calls me beautiful too.. mhmm..
he wrote me something and its so sweet..
um its:
you will always be the one i wake up for from jan threw to december, the one ill never forget but remeber. The girl who brightens up my day with the words you say. You are the chance i took with no second look, the poems in my books. i thought i was tuff but you are the first real girl to make me blush.

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Its amazing how one person can make u feel.
=] i get what u mean how u say wounder if he is sayin the same things to other girls and that. I think you should have a little faith in him.. he might turn out to be something uve always wanted. =] nice poem btw
xx