I like the title of this peice. It made me want to read the peice. The details of the poem are great and your word choice honostly blew me away. The only thing that really threw me off after reading was your flow. I am no expert on flow, believe me when I say that, so it might just be me. It seemed a bit choppy. Other than that great job. I loved the emotion. 5.5
Loved it! The passion and love here was so evident and the imagery was flawless. Sometimes we don't want to be rushed in saying "those three little words" because we want it to be special and meaningful so take your time.
"At the mention of your name I can't help but smile.
When I see your face I am entirely joyful.
You send me spiralling with your softest touch, in your arms I feel safe."