Comments : Why him

  • Good poem, but like the other one, fix the errors.

    Great job

    4/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by Bridgette

    I like it!!! This is good and there are no such things as errors in poetry the errors are what makes it special and yours don't ever change it Keep it original keep on writing I cant wait to hear more Comment some off mine to Bridgette