Omg wow! i love this poem! great job!
amazing poem. great flow and i love the words you used, well done! 5/5
xx love

Yikes..you are scary good ....keep it up

Ok im gonna give you a 10/5 , but it wont let me :-(

Shakespeare said: "Love is not Love which alters when it alteration finds, or bends with the remover to remove..."

"Love will always conquer all."..What a wonderful, meaningful statement..

This line becomes deeper and deeper and even more esoterically charged as time, itself, (main component of 'always'..;-)...goes on...

This piece is a sweet rendering of a timeless dilemma...

(PS..I think, in line 9, that you meant 'whining')