Really nice work man.

although is it about a war or this saturday when we go out! ;)

na really tho good job, its hard to portray the struggle of a war and soilders taking part.

you got it down to a tee mate.

well done

5/5

Gary

I loved this piece its really full of emotion itz a powerfull peice of poetry i think the wording was great good work!! :) 5/5

--emz--

Excellent poem, can take it either way, war or mad drink fuelled saturday nights

There is no business like reading good poetry, another good read for me thanks to you. Keep it up.

A very truthful poem. This is the one reality of our lives. Nicely expressed. It's great.