That is so sad.....hope you're not wanting to do that! I like the poem! You painted the image in my mind...and the descriptiveness really helps you see the picture...love it! Yuo're an awesome writer!

Not to bad but you should try and mix up your word choice a little more, your last poem was called a trouble teen and used that in the pome a a lot and then this one ends with the second line a troubled teen. just a thought, anyway good job again 5/5 GG23

The imagery here was amazing! You really created a scene ion my mind with your words. Well done *5/5*

Wow...ur poems rrly do speak out to meh...<3