by krystle
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Very good, i really like it |
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Omg, I really LOVED this poem. It's really amazing. I totally loved it. |
by Fsams
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Very nice poem though some lines are long the flow is not intrrupted and that shows the right usage of coherent lexis. Well done 5/5 |
by Fear2love
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I like this one |
by MR F R 3 S H
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You need no improvement lol....but I loved it this is 1 of my favs :-) |
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I loved it:0 keep up the great work/ |
by MissMeg
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Wow this poem was beautifully written, and i found nothing wrong wit it, keep up the good work. |