Comments : If You Were Still Here

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    You again expressed yourself quite well the images invited your reader and the flow was good. There are a few major spelling adjustments in this so I would read over it again and take care of that other then that a good poem Plot121

  • 18 years ago

    by L0V3 Mi fAMilY

    AND ANOTHER ONE!

  • 18 years ago

    by L0V3 Mi fAMilY

    AND ANOTHER ONE!