Check the word doesnt in first line

its odd due to ??
always make a final chack after submission

I will suggest you to move on
its not a big deal to keep staying
The poem doesnt show to me
idk why but its just made in a few minutes
you must have spent time with the poem

I can bet its made very quickly
isnt it??

tc
3/5 for the poem
Improve my dear

No offence but dont just write poetry feel it

If the way you write your poem isnt right then it wont mater what feelings you expressing how intense they may be

Well my advise if u love him ull wait, thats a decsion only u can make, either way youll quetion it to see if u have made the right decsion. I always stronly belive that ur poetry is written whats on ur heart and who cares if its done in 5 minutes or if it takes you 5 days. kepp writting i think u have it in you!!! 5.5 ALWAYS
Kate~

If hes not runnin after u babes, I think u need to move on! nice poem tho 4.5/5