I like this poem, it reminds me of my first poem. It is about the way the world keeps on turning too!

Nice job,

Take care 5/5 Ingrid

I like your use of words, and i enjoyed the read
great job

What a wonderful poem yet also deep- that a poem. This time you wrote another great poem but I'm crazy with your rythm. Its flow so great when one reading- this are the kind of a poem that can be readily aloud while number of audience are listening. keep it up-ur on track

Wow. I really like this poem. I could just imagine myself spinning around as I read watching the whole world. I'm not sure what it is about it. But I really like it.

I liked dis one....i like d way u said the sky is like a pil n stuff gr8 imagination dude...u rock 5/5 for this one...cheers rock on!!!!