"a chorus of gasps and screams"
^^ that's an amazing line, hun. I loved how you used 'chorus' instead of noise and blahblahblah.

a few minor things to fix;
herslef= herself.
and.
you have 'it`s front page news'
^^ I would, personally, take out the 'it`s' because it doesn't quite make sense, hun.

I gave you a 5|5 on this poem, because I did like it. It could have been better in stanza form, but it's amazing. Don't take this the wrong way, I'm only voicing my thoughts and opinoins.

It was amazing, though.
Which is why it got a 5|5