Awww this makes me sad =(

It didnt suck man i liked it! it makes me think of something i've been through quite a few times. well with like 2 different guys but whatever! hehe it was good tho!

"I cut my heart out for her to smile,
i stomp my heart in the ground,
the blood soaked up in the dirt"

These packed the most emotion to me, but the poem overall was fabulous! 5/5

Aww wow theres so much emotion in his poem i lovved it, i know its a sad poem, but i thought it was great.. good job buddy

Beautifully true. you really touched on the reality of love. :( sad face coz its sad but :) happy face coz its good. well written.