Comments : Slave to my thoughts

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    You need to fix up the ' in yoru poem, send me a pm if you want to know how to easily fix this...

    5/5 david

  • 16 years ago

    by Filledwithjoy

    Shut up dave. Spelling dont mtter...i can relate to this. You tend to evoke the feelings deep inside what many people dont think about...only subconciously. Its really good. Ur making something so simple sound so hard....coz it really is

  • 16 years ago

    by Filledwithjoy

    Shut up dave. Spelling dont mtter...i can relate to this. You tend to evoke the feelings deep inside what many people dont think about...only subconciously. Its really good. Ur making something so simple sound so complex....coz it really is