I remember reading your stuff before, and liking it immensly, this piece is especially thought provoking, the wordcraftivity was excellent...great job...

john

Excellent poem, you created truly powerful rhythm in it and it has some special effective tone. You expressed thoughts in whole piece on fantastic way. Well done, it absolutely deserves 5/5

I like the way this flow, you make it easy to rhyme and gives power a new meaning in each line.

Gasttlee
Another unique piece by you. Very thought provoking.

Clashes cause fear
and fear fizzles,
for you hold spirit.

This was my favorite part. Great work!
Take Care Cindy

Sadly it's true. it made me think:)

*thax for the comment*

That is definitely encouraging! 5/5