Comments : Im just an ordinary girl

  • 16 years ago

    by oddi tea

    Definatly a publisher. The rhyme is awesome, the story perfect, the cliche ending. It just makes the poem THAT much more interesting to read. A 5/5 from the one and only Veg Poet.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tony Casale

    Its a story in a book, writing itself.
    The words do no longer belong to me,
    The pen is not in my hand, its writing free.

    I absolutly love these 3 lines because i truly believe this is the way life treats us sometimes. Its completely out of our hands. Great Poem i loved reading every word :)

    ~Tony~