Wow that was odd but cool keep writing

O my GOd. i realy loved this poem maybe it relates to me. great job again

Damn girl you have something going on here,
that's wicked awesome
5/5 hopefully hearing from more

Short yet very powerful. You managed to say so much with just four two-lined stanzas which is truly impressive. Effective and very deep piece, greatly written.

Keep up!

Your writing is very effective but I think it would be even greater if it was longer. But personally, I loved it. I agree with NyellMoonlight about how it is talent to be able to say so much in so little words. Excellent.

Ally. x

Well penned. Great poem 5/5.

-Sarah A.

Short, but good(:

Where you really high?

Short and remarkable. Brilliant write!

5/5 ^_^

This isn't really my style, I don't really feel this conveys any new unexplored emotion, and the imagery is kind of cliche. Keep working on it.