Wow.
that was amazing.
it was just absolutely gorgeous!
normally i don't really like love poems, because they tend to be horribly cheesy and everything but this..... you made it flow perfectly without rhyming, the emotion and story were spectacular, and it was just beautiful. 5/5
(the deadly ninja) <lmfao

That was the best love poem i have ever read. It's like you really get what I feel. You are amazing and I hope you keep writing poetry this deep.

Wow..i like it