Lovely, really..and the colors are so successfully evocative.......

(How on earth did you carry on a conversation while memorizing all these details!!)

I love it... just at awe... i didn't want it to end. I really felt something here, which indicates a good poem. Possibly one of the best poems i've read about a sunset.

I got completely lost in so many different hues of swirly colors, and i hate nature poems, but damnit i sure did like this one, the imagery is astounding and is stuck in my grill...impressed indeed..

Woah. Simply amazing. The descriptions and vocab coupled here created the clearest imagery in my mind as I read this. I could just imagine this sunset so well. The colours and descriptions of the sky are beautiful. Breathtaking, actually. The last line is a great touch to this piece, it really does set too quickly.
5/5 for this amazing piece.

Tammie